Draft talk:Trichophyton concentricum
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Hey Sinahadipourlakmehsari, I am also assigned a dermatophyte for my project, and there are many great resources you can check out, such as " Laboratory handbook of dermatophytes" by Dr. Summerbell, "Medical mycology : the pathogenic fungi and the pathogenic actinomycete" by Dr. John Rippon, and " Identification of pathogenic fungi" by Cambell et al. You should also mention the stuff we learned from lecture about how people refuse treatment because they like the patterns it causes on the skin. Additionally, try breaking it up into subsections for clearer reading.
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[edit]Hi there,
Your species sounds very interesting, I remember learning about it in the Dermatophytes lecture we had! You have some great information so far. I agree with the User above in the idea that you should divide the information you have into different headings, for example "Growth and Morphology," "Pathogenicity," etc. This would help make things more organized and easier to read. Do you have any more information on the symptoms that occur when an individual is infected with this species? Again I agree with the User above about mentioning more of the things we learned in class because this sounds like a really cool species! Additionally, you could include some in-text links to other Wikipedia articles. For example, terms like tinea imbricata and dermatophyte could be linked to their respective Wikipedia articles. This will help readers access more information on the subject more easily. I think it would also be beneficial if you could add some more information about the species' habitat i.e. where it grows, etc. Great work so far!
Cdrazyk (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 17:52, 30 October 2015 (UTC)