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Request for Feedback on Recent Revisions

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Hello Devonian Wombat,

I have recently revised the draft article on Shuly Wintner based on the feedback you provided. I believe I have addressed the concerns regarding notability and neutral tone by adding multiple reliable secondary sources and removing any promotional language. I would appreciate it if you could review the changes and provide further guidance or approval for resubmission.

Thank you for your time and assistance.

Best regards, Ivrit~enwiki Ivrit~enwiki (talk) 14:30, 2 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]