Draft talk:Eli Mansour

Indicting a sandwich, drafting and recrafting

Within 2 minutes of what was summarized as

Initial article, admittedly only stub level. citations include light use of his synagogue's "About" rabbi; CommunityM.com for which he is a Halacha columnist, isbn for one of the books he co-authored

the above was indicted with three tags: Copy edit, Cleanup/reorganize and tone. Two minutes after the indictment, the first edit was made, summarized as

delete material that really belongs in (yet to be written) article about EJSS, the second use of that name - now Congregation Beit Edmond

Less than a minute later (02:06 & 02:06 timestamps) the entire kit and caboodle was draftified.

After a read-through, admittedly not as if taking a mid-term, of Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Layout (yes, all 22K+ bytes/nine pages according to MS Word page), Eli Mansour (the article, not his books, articles, broadcast lectures, etc) appears ready to see the wide world of Wiki articles ready for other editors to add to what it now contains, and perhaps even yield useful information to readers too. Pi314m (talk) 20:59, 14 July 2020 (UTC)