Draft talk:Alicia Bjarnason

Promotional content

Hi @Jay8g, i noticed that you flagged our article for promotional content. I went ahead and tried adjusting any content that implies any potential bias toward women activist movements. However, you readded the notice. Is it possible you can give me some insight regarding the issue as I'm not completely sure where I could be going wrong. Thanks in advance. Bri.JorM (talk) 16:55, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The entire article is full of promotional fluff, and if you and the other editors weren't part of a school project, I would assume there was WP:COI/WP:UPE going on. Please read WP:NOTPROMO and the pages linked from there, and check out some good articles in a similar topic area to get a sense for how Wikipedia articles are supposed to be written. Also pinging @Ian (Wiki Ed) who can give you further guidance. And as a side note, please stop adding a heading to the top of the article. :Jay8g [V•T•E] 18:30, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello @Ian (Wiki Ed):, I am another editor in this school project and after cutting down on "promotional fluff" we were wondering if it was enough to remove the flag on our article. If not, how can we improve? Skuni78 (talk) 18:51, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: Earth 209 - Introduction to Geology

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 3 September 2024 and 6 December 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Bri.JorM (article contribs).

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