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Declined by Jlwoodwa 5 months ago. Last edited by Jlwoodwa 5 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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According to this YouTube video:

"if someone searches the Gaza flotilla we want to be there we want to be the guys who influence what is written there how it's written and to ensure that it's balanced and zionist in nature"

where "we" are Zionists.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t52LB2fYhoY&ab_channel=IsraelNationalNews-ArutzSheva

Evidence can be seen here:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gaza_Freedom_Flotilla#Cargo

The text says:

"Israeli news reported the flotilla to be carrying ballistic vests, gas masks, night-vision goggles, clubs, and slingshots"

"UNHRC report does not mention these items and in the Turkish Report on the Israeli attack on the Humanitarian Aid Convoy to Gaza it states that all passengers and crew as well as the cargo were searched to international standards and no weapons were found, on the ships departing from Turkey."

However, the side column has been filled with pictures of weapons biasing the reader to thinking automatically that weapons were aboard.

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