Draft:Shooting of Julian Dawkins
Submission declined on 20 June 2024 by ReaderofthePack (talk).
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Comment: This is an extremely tragic event, however you will need to show where this is notable outside of the local area. This can be done by providing sources to establish how this was discussed on a global scale and by showing additional coverage over time - keep in mind that this will need to pass WP:CRIME. Offhand it looks like it got a brief amount of coverage when it happened, but not beyond that. ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 16:05, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Julian Dawkins | |
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| Born | May 12, 1991 |
| Died | May 22, 2013 (aged 21) |
| Nationality | American |
Julian Dawkins (May 12, 1991 - May 22, 2013) age 22 was shot by BART Police Same as Oscar Grant, who died in 2009, Dawkins will be buried New Cemetery.
Shooting of Julian Dawkins and Marlon Brown
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| Date | May 22, 2013 |
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| Location | Riverside, California |
| Type | Killing by law enforcement officers |
| Deaths | Julian Dawkins and Marlon Brown |
| Non-fatal injuries | 2 police officers[1] |
| Charges | No charges filed |
Marlon Brown
[edit]Marlon Brown | |
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| Born | March 4, 1975 |
| Died | May 22, 2013 (aged 38) |
| Nationality | American |
Marlon Brown (March 4, 1975 - May 22 2013) was an American shopper who came to see Julian Dawkins in 20 May 2013. Marlon’s brother Thomas Brown who is from UK. Marlon was shot in May 22 2013.
References:
[edit]1. https://www.pbs.org/newshour/nation/remembering-julian-dawkins 2. https://mynews13.com/fl/orlando/news/2015/3/16/marlon_brown_s_famil
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