Draft:Salute of the Sublime State of Iran

Salāmati-ye Dowlat-e 'Aliyye-ye Irān
English: Salute of Sublime State of Iran
سلامتی دولت علیهٔ ایران
	Former national anthem of Iran
Lyrics	unknown
Music	Gholam-Reza Minbashain
Adopted	9 July 1909
Relinquished	1933
Preceded by	Royal Salute (anthem)
Succeeded by	Imperial Anthem of Iran

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Salute of the Sublime State of Iran (Persian: ‏سلامتی دولت علیهٔ ایران‎, Salāmati-ye Dowlat-e 'Aliyye-ye Irān) was a national anthem of Iran from 1909 to 1933. The lyrics author is unknown, the melody was composed by Gholam Reza Minbashian. The anthem was adopted on July 9, 1909 and was replaced in 1933 with "Iranian Imperial anthem".^[1]

Lyrics

Persian lyrics	English translation
تا خدایْ این کشورِ ایران نمود بس درِ عزت به رویش برگشود خسروانش را کُلَه خورشید بود رایتش را فرق بر خورشید بود تا که خود چترِ عدالت گسترد خود چترِ عدالت گسترد مُلکِ ایران را نشانِ خیر و خوبی بُد لِوا این لِوا فرخنده بادا باز با دورِ بقا راست اندرین جهان افتخارِ ما، شرحِ مامَضیٰ شرحِ مامَضیٰ تا کی‌ام راست باز کوششی جوششی یاران چون به فرخ‌رسمِ دورانِ کیان مُلکِ ملت را یکی یابی روان بی‌تأمل باز باید داد جان تا به‌جز نیکی نبیند زین نشان هر که در تقدیرِ ایران بنگرد در تقدیرِ ایران بنگرد بود در مُلکِ کیان آیتِ قدرت عیان باد با تاجِ کیانی رایتِ عزت به پا هان ای برادران موطنِ عزیز بهترین سراست حفظِ خاکِ آن آبرویِ ماست باز غیرتی همتی مردان	Until the God of this land of Iran shines forth The door of dignity opened to its radiance Its Khosrowan (king) was like the sun Its banner was superior to the sun Until it spreads the umbrella of justice It spreads the umbrella of justice The kingdom of Iran was a symbol of goodness and kindness This banner will be fortunate again with the cycle of existence Righteous in this world Our pride, the narration of our past The narration of our past, how long will it be righteous? Again, with enthusiasm and zeal, friends will strive When the fortunate era of Kian arrives The kingdom of the nation will find its way Without hesitation, one must give their life So that they may not see anything but goodness from this sign Whoever looks at the destiny of Iran Looks at the destiny of Iran It was in the kingdom of Kian, a manifest sign of power With the crown of Kian, the banner of dignity will stand Oh, brothers Our dear homeland is the best Protecting its soil is our honor Again, with zeal and enthusiasm, men will strive

References

^ "Persia (1909-1933)". nationalanthems.info. Retrieved 2023-07-10.

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[1] "Persia (1909-1933)". nationalanthems.info. Retrieved 2023-07-10.

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