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Comment: This has obviously been written by a large language model. Qcne (talk) 13:11, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

Certainly! Here's a revised version of the article on Robert Nailon, aligned with Wikipedia's Neutral Point of View (NPOV) guidelines:

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Robert Nailon

- Robert Nailon** (born 1945) is an Australian bodybuilder, photographer, and artist. He is recognized for his involvement in bodybuilding and his photographic work within the sport.

1. Early Life

Robert Nailon was born in Sydney, Australia, to Michael and Elizabeth Nailon. Raised in Sydney's eastern suburbs, he developed an interest in drawing and sports during his youth. Nailon was also passionate about cars and photography, frequently driving sports cars along Sydney's beaches. In 1963, he met Paul Graham, a future official with the International Federation of Bodybuilding & Fitness (IFBB), which influenced his career path .

1. Career

1. 1. Bodybuilding and Photography

Nailon's engagement with bodybuilding began in his youth. He became known within the bodybuilding community both for his participation in the sport and for his photography. His images have appeared in several bodybuilding magazines, including *Muscular Development*, *Muscle Mag International*, *Muscle Training Illustrated*, *Strength & Health*, and *Health & Strength* .

Nailon's photography has been noted for documenting the bodybuilding scene in Australia and abroad. His work is considered a significant record of the sport during his active years .

1. 1. Gym Ownership

In 1974, Nailon opened a gym in Randwick, Sydney. The gym attracted bodybuilders and fitness enthusiasts and was known for its facilities. Nailon managed the gym until 1992 .

1. 1. Relationship with Arnold Schwarzenegger

Nailon is known for his professional relationship with Arnold Schwarzenegger, whom he photographed during Schwarzenegger's visits to Australia starting in 1972. Nailon's photographs from this period have been widely recognized and referenced in discussions about Schwarzenegger's career and bodybuilding history .

Nailon was present at the 1980 Mr. Olympia competition, a notable event in Schwarzenegger's career. His photographs and accounts of the event have been referenced in various sources .

1. Legacy and Recognition

Nailon's contributions to bodybuilding, particularly through his photography, have been recognized within the community. His work continues to be appreciated for its historical and artistic value .

1. References

1. "Muscular Development, April 2005". Muscle Memory. Retrieved from [1](https://www.musclememory.com/magCover.php?md;0405;Muscular+Development) 2. "Zane Course Cover by Robert Nailon". Built Report. Retrieved from [2](https://www.builtreport.com/frank-zane-course-cover-by-robert-nailon/) 3. "Muscle Mag International, March 2002". Muscle Memory. Retrieved from [3](https://www.musclememory.com/magCover.php?mmi;0203;Muscle+Mag+International) 4. "Muscle Training Illustrated, January 1973". Muscle Memory. Retrieved from [4](https://www.musclememory.com/magCover.php?mti;013;Muscle+Training+Illustrated) 5. "Strength & Health, April 1977". Muscle Memory. Retrieved from [5](https://www.musclememory.com/magCover.php?sh;197704;Strength+and+Health) 6. "Health & Strength, March 1996". Muscle Memory. Retrieved from [6](https://www.musclememory.com/magCover.php?hs;9613;Health+and+Strength) 7. "Interview with Robert Nailon". The Arnold Fans. Retrieved from [7](http://www.thearnoldfans.com/news/2013/7/3/interview-robert-nailon-pumps-up-thearnoldcollectioncom.html) 8. "Sydney Gym Revolution". Daily Telegraph. Retrieved from [8](https://www.dailytelegraph.com.au/news/nsw/gym-revolution-in-sydney-says-goodbye-to-the-days-of-no-airconditioning-no-towels-and-no-women/news-story/f3a71955a2d2beadfd3e71681ecbc6ef) 9. "Insights from Arnold’s Friends". Bodybuilding.com. Retrieved from [9](https://www.bodybuilding.com/fun/arnold_friends_insights.htm) 10. "Vintage Bodybuilding Mags". Retrieved from [10](https://www.vintagebodybuildingmags.com/?post_types=&s=Robert+Nailon) 11. "1980 Mr. Olympia". Uproxx. Retrieved from [11](https://uproxx.com/sports/arnold-schwarzenegger-1980-mr-olympia/) 12. "Robert with Frank Zane". Reddit. Retrieved from [12](https://www.reddit.com/r/bodybuilding/comments/975aia/robert_nailon_and_a_bearded_zane/)