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Patrik Heim is a 16-year-old Music Producer and Rapper, who was born in Hungary. He moved to Austria in 2017 and began his Music Career in 2022.

Music Career

Patrik already made some songs back in 2022 in Hungarian language, but he was never too satisfied with them. He started to do his first songs in late 2023, where he started to experiment with different sounds and lyrics. But he hadn't made his first small success until September 2023, when he joined the Polytechnische Schule Oberwart in Oberwart, Austria. The song that he had a small success with is called "PTS Rap 2324" and he made this song to promote the Polytechnische Schule Oberwart. At the moment, this is his most-viewed song, with 1,4k views and 30 likes. Since then, he always tries to do his best to make a new, unique single or album to encourage his fans and people.

Music Style

Patrik Heim's choice of music is always different. He likes to experiment with different kinds of styles, like pop, but the styles that he uses the most are Rap, Trap and Hip-Hop.

Singles and Albums

As mentioned before, the first ever single he made and released officially was "PTS Rap 2324,", which he uploaded on his official YouTube channel and different platforms like Spotify and SoundCloud. PTS Rap 2324 got an instrumental version too, that was uploaded on different platforms alongside PTS Rap 2324, and both of the songs were put in his first album, "2023".

The second single that he released was "Gen Z," which he released back in February 2024. He also made a music video for it and released it on different kinds of platforms.

The third single was "Álom Út", a Hungarian single that he made, which represents his past in Hungary and how the life for him became better. This single was also officially released on different platforms, but Patrik rarely does Hungarian music since he switched to Germany and English.

The fourth and his best song by far that he has released is called "Spirit of Love", which he made in June 2024. As the title suggests, this song is about love and how it's not often easy to express ourselves with these feelings.

The fifth and newest single that Patrik made was released not that long ago, on 21. July 2024. The song is named "Secrets", and it tells about the bad side of our world and how there are some hidden "Secrets" that people need to see/realize.

For the albums, there are 2023, Leben and the upcoming U.S.A. Album, which will include "Secrets" as the first song. This U.S.A. album will be his first trap album.

Look and height

Patrik Heim wears most of the time American-style jeans, jackets and caps, and he wears his black glasses. Sometimes, he even wears sunglasses. For shoe choice, he always wears Drip shoes or Nike shoes.

Patrik Heim is 181cm or 5'11" inches tall.