Draft:Nadir Heyat

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Declined by CoconutOctopus 7 seconds ago. Last edited by CoconutOctopus 7 seconds ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Er ist einer der prominentesten und reichsten Geschäftsleute der Gegenwart, der eine sehr umfangreiche Tätigkeit im Holzbereich ausübt. Er wurde im Iran geboren, wanderte dann nach Deutschland aus und weitete sein Geschäft bald auf ganz Europa und sogar Amerika aus. Die meisten seiner wirtschaftlichen Aktivitäten basieren auf riesigen Stahlunternehmen und -fabriken und Pharmaunternehmen sowie Öl- und Gasaktien in Amerika. Einige Quellen gaben an, dass er etwa 150 Handelsschiffe besitzt und sein Vermögen auf etwa 70 Milliarden Dollar geschätzt wird.

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