Draft:Malcolm Onsando

Malcolm Onsando
Birth name	Malcolm Mamboleo Onsando
Date of birth	26/09/1994
Place of birth	Kenya
Height	6 ft 7 in (201 cm)
Weight	18 st 4 lb (116 kg)
School	Culford School
University	Plymouth University
Rugby union career
Position(s)
Position(s)	Lock
Current team	SCM USV Timișoara
Senior career
Years	Team
2021-2022; 2023-	CS Dinamo București (rugby union); SCM USV Timișoara
International career
Years	Team
2012; 2018–Present	Kenya u20; Kenya
	Correct as of 20th July 2024

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Declined by Greenman 3 months ago. Last edited by Greenman 3 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Malcolm Onsando^[1] is an international rugby union player, who plays for the Kenyan National Team as a Lock forward^[2].^[3]^[4] Currently playing his rugby for SCM USV Timișoara in the Liga de Rugby Kaufland. He Captained the Kenya National team for two Test during the Final rugby world cup qualification tournament in 2022

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References

^ "Malcolm Onsando". Mohypehippy. Retrieved 20 July 2024.
^ "Malcolm Onsando Rugby | Malcolm Onsando News, Stats & Team | RugbyPass". www.rugbypass.com. Retrieved 20 July 2024.
^ "SCM USV Timișoara l-a transferat pe căpitanul echipei naționale a Kenyei" (in Romanian). 9 December 2022. Retrieved 20 July 2024.
^ "Malcolm ONSANDO profile and stats". all.rugby. Retrieved 20 July 2024.
^ Cite error: The named reference :0 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).

[1] "Malcolm Onsando". Mohypehippy. Retrieved 20 July 2024.

[2] "Malcolm Onsando Rugby | Malcolm Onsando News, Stats & Team | RugbyPass". www.rugbypass.com. Retrieved 20 July 2024.

[3] "SCM USV Timișoara l-a transferat pe căpitanul echipei naționale a Kenyei" (in Romanian). 9 December 2022. Retrieved 20 July 2024.

[4] "Malcolm ONSANDO profile and stats". all.rugby. Retrieved 20 July 2024.

[:0-5] Cite error: The named reference :0 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).

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