Draft:Edwin Craye

Edwin Craye
Edwin Craye
Jeeves character
First appearance	"Jeeves Takes Charge" (1916)
Last appearance	Joy in the Morning (1946)
Created by	P. G. Wodehouse
In-universe information
Gender	Male
Occupation	Boy Scout
Family	Lord Worplesdon (father); Florence Craye (sister);
Nationality	British

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Declined by KylieTastic 35 days ago. Last edited by KylieTastic 35 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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The Hon. Edwin Craye is a fictional character in the Jeeves stories. The fourteen-year-old son of Lord Worplesdon and younger brother of Lady Florence Craye, he is a bothersome Boy Scout who seeks to perform "daily acts of kindness", though he is more concerned with performing daily acts than actually being helpful. He always causes trouble for others with his meddlesome actions, especially after he has fallen behind with his daily acts of kindness and is trying to catch up. He appears in "Jeeves Takes Charge" and Joy in the Morning.

A prototype of Edwin Craye appears in the Reggie Pepper story "Disentangling Old Percy". This early version of Edwin is a meek adult. He has the title Lord Weeting in the British edition of the story.^[1]

References

^ Ring & Jaggard (1999), pp. 66–67.

[1] Ring & Jaggard (1999), pp. 66–67.

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