Draft:Brightly, brightly, and with beauty

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Declined by Mcmatter 56 days ago. Last edited by Mcmatter 56 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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"Brightly, brightly, and with beauty" is a line spoken by Michael Valentine Smith, and a few pages later by Jubal Harshaw, in Robert Heinlein's 1961 novel Stranger in a Strange Land. This lovely line is perhaps quoted by the well-read Heinlein from some other source, as in this book he quotes William Shakespeare, Robert Louis Stevenson, the Bible, and others. Online research has not yet revealed a possible prior source for this line. The title of the book itself is taken from the Bible.

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Robert A. Heinlein, Stranger in a Strange Land (1961), G. P. Putnam's Sons, New York