Draft:Atharv Bakshi
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Comment: The references that are there are improperly formatted (they aren't inline) and much of the article is very informal (e.g. "Atharv has been honored", "passionate music lover" and "His audition performance of the song “Mitwa” left the judges impressed". I'd suggest properly formatting references (see WP:INLINE) and cutting down on the promotional tone before resubmitting. Thanks! :) SirMemeGod 13:15, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
Atharv Bakshi (born 17 January 2012, Hazaribagh, Jharkhand) is a child prodigy and a popular Bollywood singer, recognized for winning SuperStar Singer Season 3 in 2024. He has also been a finalist on Sa Re Ga Ma Pa Li’l Champs (2022) and participated in Swarn Swar Bharat (2022).
Early Life and Education
[edit]Born in Hazaribagh, Jharkhand, Atharv moved to Mumbai early in life to pursue music. He is currently a student at Ryan International School, Kharghar, and takes formal classical music training from the Suresh Wadkar Academy (Ajivasan Music Academy).
Career
[edit]Sa Re Ga Ma Pa Li'l Champs (2022): Atharv gained national recognition after reaching the top six in this singing competition. His audition performance of the song “Mitwa” left the judges impressed, and his rendition of "Mohabbat Kya Hai" during the show was particularly praised by guest Karisma Kapoor.
Swarn Swar Bharat (2022): He also participated in this devotional music show, finishing in the top 8. His performances earned him an accolade from the Deputy Commissioner of Hazaribagh.
SuperStar Singer 3 (2024): Atharv's biggest achievement came when he won the title of SuperStar Singer Season 3, along with Avirbhav S.
Musical Skills and Style
[edit]Atharv is known for his versatile singing style and ability to perform complex songs. He is also proficient in playing musical instruments like the keyboard and tabla.
Recognition and Social Media Presence
[edit]With over 127,000 followers on Instagram, Atharv is active on social media where he regularly shares updates about his performances and life.
Personal Life
[edit]Atharv's family is an integral part of his journey. His father, Satyendra Bakshi, is a passionate music lover, and his mother, Purva Bakshi, has supported his aspirations.
Awards and Honors
[edit]Atharv has been honored by various local authorities for his exceptional singing talent, including being felicitated by the Hazaribagh Deputy Commissioner.
References
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