Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Henry Burrell (RAN officer)
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- Promoted --Eurocopter (talk) 19:16, 26 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Nominator(s): Ian Rose (talk)
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Nominating for ACR because, as usual, believe it meets the criteria. Having pointed out at the Australian task force page that the ‘senior service’ was ironically the least well-served of the three branches of the ADF, biography-wise, it was about time I delivered my first contribution to helping change that situation with this Chief of the Naval Staff... Any and all comments welcome! Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 11:11, 21 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support - no complaints or concerns on my part. This is a well written, illustrated and comprehensive piece. Cheers, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 07:14, 24 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Support This is a good article which meets the A class criteria. I have only a few minor comments:
- Blue Mountains is linked twice, and in the first mention its part of Sydney while in the second its a region of NSW - I'd suggest that the second geographical description be omitted
- Agree it doesn't need both, left Blue Mountains out of intro and kept the additional detail in Early Life - plus I think Wentworth Falls is probably classed as a town not a suburb... Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 11:30, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- It's a bit confusing to say that the FAA's fixed wing component 'remained a going concern until 1984' given that most units were disbanded in 1982 when Melbourne was decommissioned without replacement - 1984 was the year the last remnants of the FAA's fixed wing squadrons were dissolved after serving mainly in a fleet support/training role. Nick-D (talk) 10:39, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Quite right, generalised it now to fit with the facts without getting too deeply into it. Tks for that, Nick. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 11:30, 25 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Blue Mountains is linked twice, and in the first mention its part of Sydney while in the second its a region of NSW - I'd suggest that the second geographical description be omitted
- Support. Looks good. – Joe N 13:23, 26 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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