Wikipedia:WikiProject Film/Peer review/The Usual Suspects
I've been working hard on improving this article as I feel it is an important film. I would welcome any suggestions, comments and help to improve it in the hopes of getting it promoted to GA status. Right now, the obvious improvements are editing down the plot summary, improving the lead paragraph and I would like to add a Legacy section.--J.D. (talk) 22:11, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
Comments by Cliff smith
[edit]Well, as you said, the lead needs work. But that shouldn't be too hard.The plot, as you also said, is a few hundred words too long. Massive summarization needed there.Actors and characters should be bolded in Cast.Production could stand to see a good copyedit. Probably some subsectioning as well, e.g. Development, Casting, Filming.Reception could be retitled Release; then, the paragraph on Critical reception could be its own subsection.
Other than that, it's shaping up alright. Cliff smith (talk) 16:23, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for these suggestions. I'll start working on them right away.--J.D. (talk) 19:49, 28 July 2008 (UTC)