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Rehab (Rihanna song)

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to nominate it for GA-Status but would appreciate any input on what in the article could prevent it from achieving GA-Status.

Thanks, Blizzard01 (talk) 12:29, 11 September 2010 (UTC)

• Comments by Tbhotch^{Talk C.}

I'm reviewing the article, and if I were the GAN reviewer I would comment:

Resolved comments from TbhotchTalk C. 17:22, 13 September 2010 (UTC))

*Background on ref 3, Songfacts is not a reliable source. Done American actress, Kim Kardashian, concurred Rihanna's explaination of the song by saying that any girl that has gone through a break-up should listen to it.[8] David James Young of Sputnikmusic felt that the track consisted of sentimental lyrical analogy.[9] While Bill Lamb from About.com summarized its lyrical inspiration as being about a "bruised break-up".[10] -> Does not sounds for the section itself, also ref nine is not a reliable source, it is an user review. Done Composition "Take a Bow" (2008) and "Unfaithful" (2006). -> Maybe "Unfaithful" (2006) and "Take a Bow" (2008). Done The song opens with a tension-filled string section[13] played by Stevie Blacke[1] as a contrasting violin and cello instrumental groove with Hannon Lane's keyboard melody. -> Commas again, "The song opens with a tension-filled string section,[13] played by Stevie Blacke,[1] as a contrasting violin and cello instrumental groove with Hannon Lane's keyboard melody." Done in similarity to Justin Timberlake's -> in similarity to Timberlake's Done It is composed in the key of G-flat minor -> source states that it is composed in G minor. Done Entertainment Weekly -> overlinked Done ref 19 is reliable because... Done It's a little late where I live, so I cannot continue with the review. I'll take it later. TbhotchTalk C. 06:05, 12 September 2010 (UTC)

• Infobox

File:RihanHab.jpg need to be at most 300px.

B-side = Rehab (insrumental)

• Lead

December 8, 2008 -> December 8, 2008,

"What Goes Around.../...Comes Around" (2007). -> Maybe the release date could be used after the first Good Girl Gone Bad.

it has reached eighteen on the Billboard Hot 100. -> Billboard Hot 100, and maybe "it reached" because it could re-enter, but it is not probably.

Rihanna performed "Rehab" at the 2008 American Music Awards as well as on The Last Girl on Earth Tour and the Good Girl Gone Bad Tour where she performed the song while wearing a revealing leather outfit. -> I would add some commas like "Rihanna performed "Rehab" at the 2008 American Music Awards, as well as on The Last Girl on Earth Tour and the Good Girl Gone Bad Tour, where she performed the song while wearing a revealing leather outfit.

I am currently editing from Opera, I'll fix these sections as soon as I have pc access.

• Background

Rihanna and Justin Timberlake -> overlinked Done

At About.com, -> id.

'id' meaning?

id. -> idem, the same, in this case overlinked. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 17:22, 13 September 2010 (UTC)

• Composition

File:Rihanna Rehab.ogg.ogg should be reduced per WP:SAMPLE

Do you perhaps know where I can get hold of a reduced sample?

You may ask to another user if s/he could upload a new and reduced sample. Tbhotch^{Talk C.} 17:23, 13 September 2010 (UTC)

• Critical reception

Sal Cinquemani of Slant Magazine -> Slant is not a printed magazine

Entertainment Weekly, About.com, Justin Timberlake, What Goes Around.../...Comes Around, Good Girl Gone Bad, PopMatters, Madonna (entertainer), Babyface (musician), Take a Bow (Madonna song), Timbaland, Metro Weekly -> overlinked

• Chart performance

Billboard Hot 100 -> Billboard Hot 100

Ref 25 must be a Billboard link, it is the sixth highest debut of that week, so it exist.

on Billboard's Pop Songs chart[27], -> on Billboard's Pop Songs chart,[27]

"Rehab" debuted on the Canadian Hot 100 at number fifty-six and reached a peak of nineteen -> "Rehab" debuted on the Canadian Hot 100 at number fifty-six, and reached a peak of nineteen

"Rehab" debuted on the Canadian Hot 100 at number fifty-six -> source does not state it

on the issue dated November 17, 2008 -> on the issue dated November 17, 2008,

The song has peaked -> The song peaked

giving Rihanna her thirteenth -> Actually was her twelfth

the issue of October 27, 2008 and reached -> the issue of October 27, 2008, and reached

on January 11, 2009 -> on January 11, 2009,

after twelve weeks on the chart, shipping over 7,500 copies. ->

The song debuted on the UK Singles Chart at number fifty-one in November 2008. -> source does not state it.

aCharts should be avoided, only can be used when the information is not available on the official chart. Why you not try the Official website or chartstats?

top five hit there. [35] -> top five hit there.[35]

song has also debuted-> and it still debuting?

The song has also debuted on the Dutch Top 40 at number eighteen on the issue dated January 17, 2009.[36] -> Why the aCharts link is used when the Hung Medien or the official are availables?

It has peaked -> It peaked

• Music video

Hoy File:Rehabmusicvideo.JPG pass WP:NFCC#8? Exist other better screenshots

"Rehab" with Justin Timberlake -> overlinked

outside of Los Angeles -> Los Angeles, Texas? or maybe Los Angeles, California?

It was directed by Anthony Mandler and preview -> It was directed by Anthony Mandler, and preview

"Take a Bow" and "Unfaithful". -> overlinked

including: "Disturbia", "Take a Bow" and "Unfaithful" -> source does not state it

Timberlake's girlfriend and American actress Jessica Biel was -> Timberlake's then-girlfriend, and American actress, Jessica Biel was

It begun impacting music television stations in the United States on November 10, 2008. -> source does not state it

music video won an award for 'Best Music Video' at the 2009 Urban Music Awards where Rihanna also won the award for 'Best Female Artist' -> music video won an award for "Best Music Video" at the 2009 Urban Music Awards, where Rihanna also won the award for "Best Female Artist"

• Live performances

File:Rihannna good girl gone bad live.png -> Several issues: break the rules of fair use, especially number 8, also there is no summary of why it can be used on this article; the image is not discussed anywhere; the performing "Rehab" is no sourced.

On April 28, 2008 -> On April 28, 2008,

on November 23, 2008 -> " on November 23, 2008,

"Rehab" features as the twelveth track on Rihanna's setlist for her 2010 tour, Last Girl on Earth Tour. ->

She performed it on a therapist's couch adorned with metal casts of human heads and limbs ->

• Purchasable releases

The table needs a fix

• References

In general overlinked

Ref 3, 9, 16 work=Entertainemnt Weekly publisher=Time Inc

Ref 4, 5, 41, 46 work=Digital Spy publisher=Hachette Filipacchi Ltd

Ref 7, 51 |work=MTV News |publisher=MTV Networks or Viacom

Ref 8 |work=About.com |publisher=The New York Times Company

Ref 10 |work=IGN |publisher=News International

Ref 19 |work=The Village Voice |publisher=Village Voice Media

Ref 21 |work=The Boston Globe |publisher=The New York Times Company

Ref 22 |work=Yahoo! Music |publisher=Yahoo!

Ref 25 Billboard. Billboard.com. -> consistency -> |work=Billboard |publisher=Nielsen Business Media, Inc

Ref 24, 26, 27 and 28 the "for Rihanna" is not needed

Ref 32, 41 need accessdate

Ref 48 |work=Daily Mail |publisher=Daily Mail and General Trust

Ref 55 |work=Variety |publisher=Reed Business Information

Ref 56 |work=New York Times |publisher=The New York Times Company

Ref 57 |Work=Chicago Tribune |publisher=Tribune Company

Rev 59 |work=The Providence Journal |publisher=A.H. Belo Corporation

Ref 60 needs consistency (check ref 102)

Ref 61 needs consistency (check ref 62, 63)

Refs 90, 92 and 101 need consistency

• General

some links need update

In general, the article needs commas in general, throughout it is like a "read n'run" article, I could not tell you exactly where but some of them are lacking.