Wikipedia:Peer review/List of Primetime Emmy Award winners/archive1
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This list is comprehensive and accurate, but I would like some general article feedback before bringing it to FLC. Thanks. -- Wikipedical (talk) 00:17, 21 February 2008 (UTC)
Comments from MeegsC:
- The lead needs work. Currently, it's a series of single-sentence paragraphs (in fact, the first "sentence" isn't even a grammatical sentence), and it's pretty disjointed. It will also need in-line referencing.
- Don't forget that this encyclopedia is read by people from outside the US; don't assume prior knowledge by your reader, and don't make them link to another article to learn even the bare basics of what you're talking about! What's an Emmy? In which country are they given? Who gives them out, and for what? Link the TV stations.
- The year listing gets quite hard to interpret, as each year's "space" can vary dramatically (e.g. see 1959 v. 1968). Given that some series span multiple years (when they've won multiple years in a row), it becomes a real mess occasionally (e.g. 1966–69). I'm not sure what the solution is, but I don't think it will pass FLC as is!
- The web reference needs a better title than "www.emmy.org".
Hope this helps! MeegsC | Talk 11:07, 3 March 2008 (UTC)