Wikipedia:Peer review/I Need to Know (Marc Anthony song)/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want that this article to be acurate, so I can be able to send it for the "Featured Articules list".
Thanks, Jaespinoza.
Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
[edit]- Check out WP:LEAD, it suggests that an article like this needs much more than a single sentence in the lead section. Probably two chunky paragraphs would work ok.
- WP:HEAD suggests not overcapitalising headings, so "Chart Peformance" ought to read "Chart performance".
- First two paragraphs of "Song information" (which is a poor heading) need citation.
- Ref [4] should be moved to the other side of the colon based on WP:CITE.
- Ref's [14] to [22] should not have a space in front of them. I'd create a references column and place them (centrally aligned) in there.
- The succession boxes (should you really want them) ought to be merged and are usually located at the bottom of the article around the external links section.
- References should use the {{cite web}} template as fully completed in each case as possible - you have seven references which have the same title...
That's it for me, it's quite a long way from being a featured article. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:53, 20 March 2008 (UTC)