Wikipedia:Peer review/Cool (Gwen Stefani song)/archive1

Cool (song)

I've been attempting to transform this article into something it was once not. I would like to nominate it for featured article one day, so point out anything that you find. --Winnermario 16:26, 15 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Well, for one it starts out with a one-sentence paragraph :(. Other than that its not too bad :) - "Chart performance" should be turned into something like three long paragraphs instead of the many shorts there. "Music video" the last two paragraphs here are a little short. "Lyrics and meaning" - the quotation here is odd - is it one or two? Right now it looks like two because there are two sets of quotes... last paragraph is a little short too. Other than that the structure isn't too bad. I'd take a look over it for POV issues though - even the smallest POV problem in an article like this will draw many objections at FAC time. Ryan Norton ^{T | @ | C} 22:14, 21 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]