Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/The Office (American season 4)/archive1

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The list was not promoted by User:Matthewedwards 03:15, 20 October 2008 [1].

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The Office (US TV series) season 4

previous FLC (09:21, 25 August 2008)

Is this list ready to be featured? Nergaal (talk) 17:01, 6 October 2008 (UTC)

Comments

• What makes the following reliable sources?
  • http://www.officetally.com/
  • http://www.celebrityspider.com/
  • http://tvbythenumbers.com/
• Current ref 29 (CBS and ABC...) says the publisher is ZapToIt but it links to a page on Office Tally. I think you got a link mixed up somewhere.
• Pick either last name first or first name first on your references and stick with it. Right now you have authors in both formats.

Otherwise sources look good, links checked out with the link checker tool. Ealdgyth - Talk 13:22, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

• what do you think of the new links? Nergaal (talk) 19:05, 15 October 2008 (UTC)

Comments

• repetitive wording in "who are both executive producers on both versions"
• "with Feig and Whittingham both directing multiple episodes." both isn't needed here
• "ten of which... four of which"
• remove the "the" at "returned on the February 11,"

Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 16:55, 15 October 2008 (UTC)

• How's now? Nergaal (talk) 18:14, 15 October 2008 (UTC)

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