User talk:UrAznBoi/sandbox
Hey UrAznBoi, it's Bailey. Over all solid work you got here. Your tone is primarily unbiased, except when you go into comparing gender roles of the Babaylan's with western gender roles for women which isn't really necessary. For your lead section give a little more of a definition before diving into a quote, unless your planning on using the definition already present on the existing page. The Table of contents kind of confused me, the sections don't seem super purposeful, nor are the sections labels in the rest of your article which made it hard to tell where one stopped and the next began. But again good beginning!!
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