User talk:Tizonacampeador/sandbox
This looks so good, and you've clearly done a ton of work on it!
-Favorite part: Clear and comprehensive review of causes. This is excellent, and I appreciate the fact that you included with each cause the rough probability that it would present with neuritis.
-Suggestions: 1) I would consider rewording the intro to be a bit simpler. It's often the only part of the article that some people (e.g. myself) will read about topics, so it seems like it might be a good example to make this part super easy to read (for example, replace words like "etiology," which might be confusing, with "causes," which anyone could understand) and save the detail/jargon for later in the article. 2) (Minor suggestion) You mention at the beginning of your "infections" subsection of "Causes" that neuritis can be a result of autoimmune reaction to infection. This makes total sense to us, but it might be worth explaining this part a little further (even with one more sentence, maybe-- or just by WikiLinking to another page, perhaps?), since this could be a new concept to anyone who is not medical.
Other than that, I'm super impressed. Nice job!
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