User talk:ThereseOwusu/Sandbox

Moved material from mainspace

Greetings. My name is Jonathan Obar, I'm one of the coordinators for the Canadian arm of the Education Program. I have moved your article back to your sandbox because it is not ready for the mainspace and will likely be deleted within a few days unless you make some modifications. A few things that your article must have:

A title that is appropriate for the encyclopedia, your title read like an essay title
An introductory section - these sections are concise overviews of the article. They DO NOT include a thesis.
Avoid argumentative writing. Take some time and review the content guidelines on WP. Look at some successful articles. Note how material is presented. Arguments are welcome, but need to be integrated carefully.

If you have questions about formatting and content guidelines. Please contact Prof. Valpy or your TA to inquire.

Thanks. Jaobar (talk) 20:21, 15 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]