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Your submission at Articles for creation: Aqua Sport Sea Skimmer (July 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Dan arndt were:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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Dan arndt (talk) 01:37, 16 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Terrisays! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Dan arndt (talk) 01:37, 16 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Aqua Sport Sea Skimmer (July 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheBirdsShedTears was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

It still reads like an advertisement and essay. Please review MOS:LEAD and WP:YFA.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Aqua Sport Sea Skimmer and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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TheBirdsShedTears (talk) 07:49, 16 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Aqua Sport Sea Skimmer (July 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Doric Loon were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. Please see the guide to writing better articles for information on how to better format your submission.

The comment the reviewer left was:

I think this does deserve a Wikipedia article and would encourage further work on it. At present, though, the draft is a little confused - is it about the product or the history of the firm? I would make it more about the product, so "Termination", which seems to be about the firm going into receivership, should not be a separate section. I want to know what came of the Navy contract. The footnotes need to be improved,and I would suggest using the template "cite news" for newspaper articles. I'm not sure what footnote 1 refers to, but Harry Hoch should probably be mentioned in the article text. I have added a lead section and made a few other stylistic changes, but this is not yet ready for publication.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Doric Loon (talk) 14:49, 20 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Aqua Sport Sea Skimmer (July 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Locomotive207 was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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🌀Locomotive207-talk🌀 02:04, 28 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Aqua Sport Sea Skimmer has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Aqua Sport Sea Skimmer. Thanks! TheBirdsShedTears (talk) 05:02, 3 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Aqua Sport Sea Skimmer (August 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sahaib3005 was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Aqua Sport Sea Skimmer and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Aqua Sport Sea Skimmer, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Sahaib3005 (talk) 20:13, 8 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Aqua Sport Sea Skimmer (September 9)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by TheChunky were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Aqua Sport Sea Skimmer and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Aqua Sport Sea Skimmer, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

— The Chunky urf Al Kashmiri ^{(Speak🗣️ or Write✍️)} 07:35, 9 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

License tagging for File:1966 Aqua Dart.jpg

Thanks for uploading File:1966 Aqua Dart.jpg. You don't seem to have indicated the license status of the image. Wikipedia uses a set of image copyright tags to indicate this information.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Sea Skimmer, Aqua Skimmer, Aqua Dart has been accepted

Sea Skimmer, Aqua Skimmer, Aqua Dart, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 21:27, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Editing with a conflict of interest

Hello, Terrisays. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:

avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization, clients, or competitors;
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do your best to comply with Wikipedia's content policies.

In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you.-- Ponyo^{bons mots} 23:43, 7 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Also, please stop reverting the Commons Delinker bot that is used to remove copyright violations. You are restoring red links to deleted images, or relinking to images with copyright issues.-- Ponyo^{bons mots} 23:43, 7 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Terrisays your images will continue to be deleted as you are not providing the correct licensing or proving you hold the copyright as is required. Please read Wikipedia:Copyrights#Guidelines for images and other media files and the links therein. Repeated copyright violations may lead to a block of your account; please ensure you understand what is expected when uploading and using images.-- Ponyo^{bons mots} 23:54, 7 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

File copyright problem with File:1975 Sea Skimmer Pyramid Lake California.jpg

Thank you for uploading File:1975 Sea Skimmer Pyramid Lake California.jpg. However, it is currently missing information on its copyright and licensing status. Wikipedia takes copyright very seriously. It may be deleted soon, unless we can verify that it has an acceptable license status and a verifiable source. Please add this information by editing the image description page. You may refer to the image use policy to learn what files you can or cannot upload on Wikipedia. The page on copyright tags may help you to find the correct tag to use for your file. If the file is already gone, you can still make a request for undeletion and ask for a chance to fix the problem.

Please also check any other files you may have uploaded to make sure they are correctly tagged. Here is a list of your uploads.

If you have any questions, please feel free to ask them at the media copyright questions page. Thanks again for your cooperation. Ponyo^{bons mots} 23:59, 7 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Also tagged for the same issues:

File:1961 Sea Skimmer.jpg

File:Geraldine Hoch, Electroforming Missile body Midwest Research Institute in Kansas City, 1963.jpg

File:Geraldine Marie Hoch, 1968.jpg

-- Ponyo^{bons mots} 00:06, 8 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]