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I know you meant well, but the character descriptions you wrote sounded more like they were written for a fan site than for an encyclopedia. It's kinda complicated to explain the difference, and the only reference I can point you to is a long policy page: WP:TONE, which doesn't entirely cover it either. I will try to explain later, but I have RL stuff to do right now and can't write it all up. Just wanted to let you know I'm not trying to be mean. GJC22:30, 23 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]