User talk:Pseudo-Richard/sandbox
It seems that you have posted this message to me. I didnt know how to reply it. So I am writing to you here. Actually I didnt use these words:"in most parts of the world". It was already there like this. I have actually changed it to "throughout the world". I know this for sure, since I am one of Jehovah's witnesses. Thank you.
--your message-- Regarding your edit to Jehovah concerning Jehovah's Witnesses
Your edit uses "weasel" words which fail to fully inform the reader. Phrases like "in most parts of the world" cause the reader to ask "well, where do they not use the the word Jehovah"? This information should be provided either in the text or in a footnote. And a citation to a reliable source would help, too.
--Richard 15:25, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
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