User talk:Masonbissada/Article Draft

Mason . . I don't see any peer review. Is it located elsewhere? ProfHanley (talk) 18:20, 12 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Leticia Arellano Peer review

The way that this page is laid out is precise and consistent. You did a great job explaining every episode, however there are some parts where there is unnecessary information. For example in the introduction it would be best to cut out the last sentence where it says, "The podcast is viewed a trendsetter for "movies by minutes" podcasts, of which there are now over 100." Instead try to incorporate the 100 into the previous sentence.You can include it like this, "Thus far, there are over 100 series and have covered the original trilogy, the prequel trilogy, and The Force Awakens." In the first episode, where it says Tony Consiglio and Chris Radtke try and have their names be linked to their wiki. It might make your page more notable as well. Overall I really like the structure and theme of your Wiki page, keep it going! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Letyedith292 (talk • contribs) 23:30, 14 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]