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Your submission at Articles for creation: Gamma Delta Epsilon Fraternity (September 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robertsky was:

This submission has been declined for one or more of the following reasons:

It is primarily designed to threaten, disparage or attack its subject.
It is a biography of a living person that is unreferenced and entirely negative in tone.
It is a page that is purely vandalistic in nature.

This page meets one or more of the general criteria for speedy deletion and may be deleted without notice. Users who continue to create inappropriate pages will be blocked from editing Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The bulk of the History section is about the fights and and deaths associated with the organisation, which qualifies this page as an attack page. See point 1 of the decline notice.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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– robertsky (talk) 03:26, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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AfC notification: Draft:Gamma Delta Epsilon Fraternity has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Gamma Delta Epsilon Fraternity. Thanks! Naraht (talk) 14:30, 24 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Gamma Delta Epsilon

Hello. I'm Naraht and I'm an experienced wikipedia editor in both Fraternities and Sororities in general and with those in the Philippines. I'm an alumnus of Alpha Phi Omega in the United States. I'd like to take a further look at the Gamma Delta Epsilon draft with you. I *very* much understand that the controversies section does *not* represent an attack on anyone else. I expect that you are a member of Gamma Delta Epsilon, but going through the draft process, the issues with Conflict of Interest are considerably lessened. I'll watch your talk page, feel free to respond here.Naraht (talk) 14:35, 24 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Responded on my page to keep the discussion in one place.Naraht (talk) 16:54, 25 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gamma Delta Epsilon Fraternity (December 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Greenman was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

"To then young and ambitious Geronimo O. Veneracion, it was not about material wealth a lawyer can have by thievery but the unfathomable brilliance of a lawyer's mind that when properly wielded can create wonders beyond one's imagination." and the rest of that section is nowhere close to the right tone.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Greenman (talk) 12:00, 30 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Tonal Issues...

The article was rejected for tone. I think that removing the sentence starting with "The fraternity imbibes..." and merging the first two paragraphs and removing the "Half a century later, it is now considered as an institution within the university where every male law student considers membership." would be a good start. (It isn't provable or encyclopedic.

I would like to see this in mainspace, though once approved, there are ways to combine the references to the Notable Alumni.Naraht (talk) 15:50, 28 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Gamma Delta Epsilon Fraternity has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Gamma Delta Epsilon Fraternity. Thanks! Naraht (talk) 15:52, 28 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gamma Delta Epsilon Fraternity (May 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Stuartyeates was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

I'm just not seeing the level of coverage in independent sources to meet WP:GNG

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Gamma Delta Epsilon Fraternity and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Stuartyeates (talk) 05:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Gamma Delta Epsilon Fraternity

Hello, Lawyist 22. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Gamma Delta Epsilon Fraternity, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 21:22, 29 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Gamma Delta Epsilon Fraternity

Hello, Lawyist 22. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Gamma Delta Epsilon Fraternity".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 05:51, 2 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]