User talk:Kshea692

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:41, 12 February 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review Response

Hi Kyle,

Thank you for your thorough feedback. I appreciate your word choice recommendations and will definitely focus on utilizing a more scientific vernacular, thanks again. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shannonnancysw (talk • contribs) 23:52, 31 March 2019 (UTC)

A page you started (Environmental impacts of fur farming) has been reviewed!

Thanks for creating Environmental impacts of fur farming.

I have just reviewed the page, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

Thank your for your informative new article, "Environmental impacts of fur farming".

To reply, leave a comment here and prepend it with {{Re|Doomsdayer520}}. And, don't forget to sign your reply with ~~~~ .

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---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 19:48, 15 April 2019 (UTC)

Also note that there are some formatting problems in your references: see the red text in the list of footnotes at the bottom of the article. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 19:49, 15 April 2019 (UTC)

Instructor Feedback

You've done a lot to create the new article Environmental impacts of fur farming, nice work! Here are some suggestions to make sure you get a good grade:

1. I think you can combine this content with the main page of Fur farming under a new section Environmental Impacts. You can also add you content on Trade, etc as you like. It will get more readership if it's combined with a more central topic article.
2. Your "impacts" section can be broken down into different impact categories, i.e. water, air, etc, and your "sustainability" section can also be incorporated as an "energy" category. Sustainability applies to all these categories. A "comparison with faux fur" would also be appropriate.
3. check for spelling and grammar throughout.

--Julianfulton (talk) 21:25, 19 April 2019 (UTC)