User talk:Jclark17/sandbox
Hey! I really like your topic and the fact that you want to work on it since you feel that no one cares about it or addresses it very much. But, do you know exactly what you're going to add? Like a word for word breakdown of what you want to put on this stub? I would draft that and get all of your sources together, then you should be good to go!
Kloe Shellmire Peer Review
[edit]The article I choose was “Mothers of the Movement” which was an article that’s about African American mothers who (WHOSE*) children died due to police brutality. The “Mothers of the Movement” article only have a few information about the group, so I would be adding more educational information. For the most part it’s been a challenge to find academic resources for the group because, so many don’t know or care that much about them. My job will be to make the group importance and meaning more factual and informational. I would like to put more facts about the founders, and how the group was invented. Many of the articles I found, although they weren’t academic, did have a lot of the mother’s viewpoints of why they choose to get together and the impact the group have. Since it’s been hard to find academic articles about the group my next step is to find the interviews of the mothers that were the starters of the group. I think adding more information about how to join and the mission of the group will make the article more believe and maybe even have people more interested about joining the group.
Explains very well on what you feel about the article but actually put it in words on what you will really be adding to the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kloesimone01 (talk • contribs) 03:55, 3 November 2017 (UTC)