User talk:DaamoonGhahari/sandbox
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[edit]Good sources, nice plan.
Sentences are well written, my only recommendation would be to maybe restructure a little:
PMP22 is a 22 kDa transmembrane glycoprotein made up of 160 amino acids. It is glycosylated in the endoplasmic reticulum, where it is also co-localized with the BiP chaperone. Schwann cells in the peripheral nervous system show high expression of PMP22, where it can constitute 2-5% of total protien content in compact myelin.
This makes it a little clearer that the focus of the article is PMP22, rather than Schwann cells etc.
Great start! Vellichor (talk) 19:13, 4 November 2015 (UTC)