User talk:Coloneldr

Your submission at Articles for creation: British Society for Research on Ageing (BSRA) (January 31)

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Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 21:01, 31 January 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: British Society for Research on Ageing (BSRA) (March 5)

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Kevin Rutherford (talk) 03:25, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

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Hi, I've done some cleanup to the draft to bring it more in line with Wikipedia house style. It would be great to have an article about this society: it does need more sources though. Thanks for making a start, and please keep at it. MartinPoulter (talk) 16:17, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

I've just noticed that a paragraph in the above article was taken verbatim from a publication which is copyright Oxford University Press. Copyright violation is taken very seriously on Wikipedia: you must not insert copyrighted text and any such text will be deleted on sight, as I've just deleted the paragraph. A consequence of Wikipedia is Free is that it has to be an original or freely-licensed work. Please reply to show that you've understood this before you make any more edits to Wikipedia.

When I said above that the article needs more sources, I meant that you need to add more sources before re-nominating it. As it stands, the article will probably get turned down a third time. MartinPoulter (talk) 22:27, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

I've made some formatting improvements to your draft. The references were not appearing in the foot of the page and I've fixed that. I've also taken teh liberty of removing a paragraph which had unencyclopaedic speculation. On Wikipedia, we have to keep to a descriptive, factual tone. Just to reiterate my request above, can you reply on this page to say you've understood the point about copyright? Thanks in advance, MartinPoulter (talk) 15:43, 22 March 2014 (UTC)

Hi Martin,

I'm really not sure how to use the system to contact you but thanks for your help. As an academic I fully understand the concept of plagiarism, the section in question was handed to me by the Chair of BSRA who has subsequently agreed that he hadn't appropriately paraphrased the quote — Preceding unsigned comment added by Coloneldr (talk • contribs)

That's fine. Lots of online communities say they respect copyright, but Wikipedia is extremely serious about it: just wanted to make sure that had got across. To send a user a message, click on the "Talk" link next to their name and click "New section" on the resulting page. Cheers, MartinPoulter (talk) 23:18, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: British Society for Research on Ageing (BSRA) (March 13)

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///EuroCarGT 00:22, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at AfC British Society for Research on Ageing (BSRA) was accepted

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Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 18:33, 23 March 2014 (UTC)