User talk:Chrisuw/Bến Thành Market

This is where I have some feedback and did my peer review. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chrisuw/Ben_Thanh_Market/Kensu.bates_Peer_Review Kensu.bates (talk) 20:05, 31 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This is a link to my feedback for your article (peer review.)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chrisuw/Ben_Thanh_Market/Tif0409_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review Good work!!Tif0409 (talk) 09:55, 1 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on your article

@Chrisuw: Your article is great! You really improved it so much and add so much material. My only real piece of feedback is that you've got some material that feels like it might be more appropriate for travel guide than an encyclopedia article. For example, stuff like distance to particular other attractions feels like that to me. Think about it and consider if you need it. In general though, I think this is good to go!

You should take a look at this list of suggestions for polishing your article which is a helpful set of ideas from altsalt. Many won't apply but some might. I've gone through and made a few edits to your articles to clean things up—mostly small stylistic things but there are definitely more. Look at the history to see what I've done before so you get a sense.

In any case, do a pass or two to address things I've mentioned and any of the things on the list on our website that apply and that you think will be helpful and/or improve the article. Then go ahead and make it live. Good work! —mako ๛ 06:10, 14 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]