User talk:Cdfuller410
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[edit]Hello, Cdfuller410, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:36, 23 February 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]This is a great start. Some of the formatting doesn't seem to have gone through. I can see where you want links/references to be but they aren't actually working yet. Maybe check and see if you are formatting it right in the editing space. Some of the information doesn't flow well together, but I am assuming that is because its getting added to different parts of the page. If it is all supposed to flow together then you should work on your transitions. Finally, the use of convoluted when talking about the correct last name is a great word, but it doesn't match the style of the rest of your writing, it seems like a random big vocab word just thrown in there. Alexhuseman (talk) 01:41, 30 April 2016 (UTC)