User talk:Caitlinoeser

Hi! I read your edit on the Fetal Rights Wiki Page. I think you picked an excellent and relevant topic to add to. I think the fact that this occurrence is so recent and significant makes your edit a great addition to the Fetal Rights Wiki Page. Overall, I think the addition you made was great. I would try to use Internal Links more often (as often as possible, such as when you mention Colorado, North Dakota, personhood, amendments, and so on). These internal links are a great way to easily navigate through Wikipedia, and I believe using them also makes your work appear stronger and better developed. Also, I would take the last sentence out of your addition. This seems like a very biased or opinionated statement and probably shouldn't be on Wikipedia. Other than that, I think you did a great job. Good Luck! Whitek67 (talk) 14:24, 7 November 2014 (UTC)