User:Dh5602a
Peer Review:
I reviewed your article of Madison, Tennessee and would like to comment on some of the things I saw. The organization of the article is done very well. It flows and transitions nicely and is easy to follow. One thing I would suggest adding would be in the History section. While there is a lot of information, I feel like you can expand on some of the things mentioned and/or add more facts to it. I also believe that more can be added to the recreation section that provides more detail of what is in Madison, TN. All in all, this article has a lot of information present, but needs a little more of an expansion of some topics mentioned. Great job!
Thank you so much for the feedback! I certainly plan to expand on the history section of the article by enhancing the photographs used and give more depth to the recreation aspect. Again, thank you for the feedback!
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The three options I have for editing a Wikipedia page are as followed:
This page requires and increased amount of sources that are not first person in nature and more secondary sources like historical information and facts. There are also things within the article that need additional in-text citing.
This articles sources are unclear and need more inline citations. I also believe some historical and quantitative fact such as land size are missing from the article.
This page has not been updated in a long time. I feel that it's sentences can be elongated through structure and the article could be enhanced through the use of photos and other media.
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The Madison TN topic seems the most promising. You are welcome to move forward drafting the article. Erickaakcire (talk) 19:15, 26 September 2016 (UTC)