Template:Did you know nominations/Valentino Pittoni

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 07:20, 20 July 2014 (UTC)

Valentino Pittoni

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~~... that in 1920 the socialist politician Valentino Pittoni (pictured) argued that Trieste should have become a state in the Austrian republic?~~

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Garrard Tyrwhitt-Drake

Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 08:17, 29 June 2014 (UTC).

ALT1: ... that in 1920 the socialist politician Valentino Pittoni (pictured) argued that the Italian city of Trieste should have become a state in the Austrian republic?

In ALT1 I added "the Italian city of" before Trieste to make the hook clearer for the geographically challenged (like myself). 97198 (talk) 12:09, 29 June 2014 (UTC)

I'm ok with ALT1. --Soman (talk) 18:03, 30 June 2014 (UTC)

Full review needed; struck original hook in favor of ALT1. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:55, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
This article is new enough and long enough. The ALT1 hook is cited inline and the image is in the public domain. I saw no evidence of close paraphrasing or other policy issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:49, 19 July 2014 (UTC)