Template:Did you know nominations/Michael Le Bourgeois
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:44, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
Michael Le Bourgeois
[edit]- ... that Michael Le Bourgeois was the first Jerseyman to sign a professional contract with Jersey?
- Reviewed: Christian Boussus
Created/expanded by The C of E (talk). Self nom at 09:29, 26 September 2012 (UTC)
The hook needs clarity. I had to visit the article to find out that this was about Rugby. Would you care to suggest an alternative hook that works for those who have no idea of the subject? I expect a DYK to give me a full piece of information that makes me want to travel the links. This one made me decide to in order to see why it was nominated, not because it drew me to the article(s) Fiddle Faddle (talk) 08:01, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
- Alt1 ... that Michael Le Bourgeois was the first Jerseyman to sign a professional rugby contract with Jersey? The C of E. God Save The Queen! (talk) 08:08, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
- Infinitely to be preferred. The hook now has the clarity that says to me "This is a topic that could interest me, I will look". Fiddle Faddle (talk) 08:22, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
- So are you OK to tick it off then? The C of E. God Save The Queen! (talk) 08:26, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
As far as I can tell this DYK passes all the criteria set for it. Fiddle Faddle (talk) 09:00, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
- Alt1 ... that Michael Le Bourgeois was the first Jerseyman to sign a professional rugby contract with Jersey? The C of E. God Save The Queen! (talk) 08:08, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
