Template:Did you know nominations/Max Carey

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 08:49, 29 November 2014 (UTC)

Max Carey

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... that Max Carey (pictured) dropped out of seminary to play baseball?

ALT1:... that Baseball Hall of Famer Max Carey (pictured) held two patents?
Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Bossa Nova U.S.A.
Comment: Pre-expansion was 1,548 characters.

5x expanded by Muboshgu (talk), EricEnfermero (talk). Nominated by Muboshgu (talk) at 21:34, 7 November 2014 (UTC).

5× expansion of 6 October 2014 version completed from 1,548 characters to 7,787 and nominated 5 days later. Duplication detector check of online sources [1][2][3] and quick read through the others (that either can't go through Dup detector or don't contain prose) reveal no close paraphrasing issues (waiving direct quotes and applying WP:LIMITED). Article is well-sourced. Hook is 67 characters long (ALT1 is 66); both are under the 200 character max. limit and are interesting. Image is free and in public domain. Ref 1 (verifying both main and ALT1) is a reliable source from the SABR. QPQ done. Looks good to go! —Bloom6132 (talk) 02:41, 25 November 2014 (UTC)
I like the first hook, but it's lacking an inline cite. Yoninah (talk) 11:44, 27 November 2014 (UTC)

It's cited. At the end of the "Minor league baseball" section: "Able to make a career in baseball, Carey decided to drop out of Concordia.[1]" – Muboshgu (talk) 21:13, 27 November 2014 (UTC)

Thanks. I missed that. Restoring tick. Yoninah (talk) 22:23, 27 November 2014 (UTC)