Talk:Vuélveme a Querer (Cristian Castro song)/GA1

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Reviewer: DivaKnockouts (talk · contribs) 04:51, 20 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Link compilation album
"The song speaks of a protagonist who begs his lover to come back after being without her for a long time." — Not to fond of "to come back after being without her for a long time.", consider re-wording. :)
"In the United States, the song peaked at number two on the Billboard Hot Latin Songs and number one on the Billboard Latin Pop Songs." — Missing a word (charts at the end of the sentence)
"It received Billboard Latin Music Award and a Lo Nuestro nomination for Pop Song of the Year the following year." — Missing a word ("a" after "received" and before "Billboard")
"Lührs received an award at the Pop/Rock category on the American Society of Composers, Authors and Publishers (ASCAP) Awards of 1997." → "Lührs received an award in the Pop/Rock category at the American Society of Composers, Authors and Publishers (ASCAP) Awards of 1997."

He re-recorded the song? Hm, I'd be happier with information supporting what concert it was taken from or if it's from a tour. (If that information is available, that is)
Link live album.

""Vuélveme a Querer" was released on radio stations on September 1995 and debuted at number fifteen on the Billboard Hot Latin Songs chart on the week of September 9, 1995." → "Vuélveme a Querer" was released to radio stations in September 1995 and debuted at number fifteen on the Billboard Hot Latin Songs chart for the week of September 9, 1995."
"On the Billboard Latin Pop Songs chart, the song debuted at number thirteen on the chart." — Redundant use of "chart".
" It was also nominated Pop Song of the Year at the 1996 Lo Nuestro Awards which went to Enrique Iglesias for his song "Si Tú Te Vas"." — Missing a word ("for" after "nominated" and before "Pop".)

Did the song not rank on the Latin Pop Songs Year-End chart? If it spent fourteen weeks at number then, I'm sure it did.

You know, I actually had the 1995 Year-End charts. But I didn't archive it and the issue is missing on Google Books. Stupid Billboard. >:(

FN#1 — No italics to Allmusic. Not a printed source per WP:CITEHOW
FN#2 — WP:CITEHOW
FN#4 — WP:CITEHOW
FN#5 — Link Billboard and Prometheus Global Media, as it is the first time you use them in the references.
FN#6 — Accessdate missing.
FN#7 — See FN#6.
FN#9 — See FN#7.
FN#10 — Work and publisher parameters missing.
FN#12 — Volume missing.

Putting article On hold until minor issues have been resolved. — Diva Knockouts 05:58, 20 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I'll start working on the problem once I finished up Mi Reflejo's GAN review. Erick (talk) 02:57, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I should have this started on the weekend. Erick (talk) 22:14, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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