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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:09, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:09, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
I have done a lot of copyediting, please don't repeat some obvious errors. Here are my comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:22, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- General
- Say either rajas or Rajas
- Done as "Rajas"
- Location
- Vizianagaram (meaning: "the city of victory") In which language?
- Done
- Features
- Is it Motimahal or Moti Mahal?
- Corrected
- This prominent monument of the past glory Sounds a bit unencyclopedic
- Corrected
- You need to introduce the MANSAS Trust and Dr. P.V.G. Raju
- Done with a reference
- Sources
- Andhra Pradesh] What is this?
- Corrected.
- Sainsf Thanks for the review and edits. I have addressed all the above issues in the article.Nvvchar. 12:07, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Nvvchar: I can promote this now, but please remember to copyedit articles before nomination to avoid simple errors. And no need to ping me all the time, I keep review pages watchlisted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 12:11, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- OK, thanks.Nvvchar. 12:17, 20 June 2016 (UTC)