Talk:Value network/Archives/2012

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This would be a more useful page if it interrelated with the rest of wikipedia - I note that there are no internal links from this page out to other terms. Edward Vielmetti 18:27, 4 May 2006 (UTC)

I have tried to rework the page over the last few days, but can't seem to get started. I now have a feeling why it is difficult to get this right. The page starts with a general description of what a value network is. At this point in time however, it is not really possible to give a factual definition that will do justice to the concept. The concept is young. The concept arose from very different angles. The current introduction to me seems like a compromis, htat tries to cover all different definitions in one single go. I would suggest writing an introduction that is more abstract, posing the value network as a new business model that has only recently emerged and is still in development. The sections that describe different thinker's cue on the value network is very valuable. What would also be welcome is some context describing why value networks are emerging as a business model. Adding relevant links to contextual information would make it complete for now. Why not invite the authors of the original subjects over to add some to the topic? Sergej71 (talk) 21:17, 1 May 2008 (UTC)

- Added links between section Verna Alee's Value Networks and value network analysis Sergej71 (talk) 08:46, 24 April 2008 (UTC) - Changed the first sentence to meet the Wikipedia style guide's terms of reference. Brought the title of the articel (Value Network) in line with the subject of the first sentence by changing thatsubject from plural to singular. Then shifting to plural in the second sentence.Sergej71 (talk) 08:59, 24 April 2008 (UTC)

Thanks Edward, makes sense. Will also do some clean-up. User:Jheuristic