Talk:USS West Corum

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Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
September 29, 2008	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review

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Hello! I'll have the full review up in an hour or two....(my roommate's dad is coming up, so I might have to get moving, take a shower, etc.) Cheers! —the_ed 17— 17:35, 28 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:

B. MoS compliance:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
no pictures in article

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
any possible photo for a ship that was part of the same class as the West Corum?
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
on hold

Just two issues...a photo of a similar boat? (above) Also, this sentence: "...the ship was renamed USAT Will H. Point (though some sources indicate William H. Point instead) in honor of a former officer in the Quartermaster Corps.[17]" Which sources indicate what? Cheers! —the_ed 17— 18:23, 28 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I've found two photos of Will H. Point at the Australian War Memorial site. I'll upload those tomorrow and add to the article. I'll post here when that's done. — Bellhalla (talk) 03:22, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Images added to article. — Bellhalla (talk) 15:35, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Beautiful! —the_ed 17— 17:22, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Any references for notes 2 & 3? —the_ed 17— 18:27, 28 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Notes 2 and 3 are each from the refs immediately preceding them. If you think it better that the notes explicitly have reference info in them, I'll add to each. — Bellhalla (talk) 03:22, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I simply added the ref numbers...(there should be something there)...if that's not enough in your opinion, feel free to add the name of the ref to the notes or something of the like. Cheers! —the_ed 17— 17:22, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]