Talk:Typhoon Zola/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 05:52, 20 May 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:52, 20 May 2018 (UTC)

• Guam should be linked in the first mention.
  •  Done. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
• The track map differs from the prose. It did become extratropical over the Sea of Japan, but the map shows it tropical at that time.
  • Track map is from JTWC so it's the usual JTWC vs JMA problem that springs up. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
• Use some pronouns to refer the storm other than "Zola".
  • Changed two. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
• "7 people" Write out numbers less than ten.
  • Yeah but I chose not to spell out "30". YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)

• "Thirty-eight homes" This shouldn't be written out, to be consistent.

• ...or you can write out all the numbers in the sentence.

• You don't start a sentence with a number. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)

• "Sixteen ships" Same here.

• I mean you're correct here, but I had to stick a "a total of" to avoid the same problem :P YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)

• And in impact section.

• The Yen sign should be used.
  • Good call. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
• "Tropical Storm Winona, also assisted" Remove "also".
  • This made no sense till I read the full context of the sentence :P YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:23, 22 May 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the review :D YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)