Talk:This Is Not Happening (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 16:12, 10 June 2012 (UTC)

General

• Be consistent with ref date formats; is it 2 March 2012 or March 2, 2002

Plot

• Perhaps this could do with a bit of tweaking, the third and fourth paragraphs could be merged. Any synonyms for 'Later' as it leads the second and third paragraphs.
• "and the agents realise that Smith is still in the compound." should that be 'realize' on a count of American spelling?

Production

• "his che character..." should that be there?

Only concerns, otherwise I think this is fine for GA. No problems with sourcing and imaging, on hold. -- Lemonade51 (talk) 16:12, 10 June 2012 (UTC)

I believe I have addressed all of the issues. Thank you for the review!--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:08, 10 June 2012 (UTC)