Talk:The X Factor (Australian TV series) season 3/GA1

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 12:16, 22 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"Following bootcamp, was..." remove comma. Done
Just something for you to think about – Why is Melanie C referred to as her full first name but Mel B is shortened? Double check if it's 'Mel B' not 'Melanie B' on the X Factor website.
- On the show, she is known as Mel B. Oz ^talk 22:01, 22 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Should Over-25s be hyphenated? Again unless the official site does so, I see no reason why it should be there.
- Per WP:XFACTOR. Oz ^talk 22:01, 22 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"The season sparked controversy, including Mel B's attitude...", replace including with 'namely'. Done

"...judge Kyle Sandilands announced on his breakfast radio show, Kyle & Jackie O, that..." remove comma between Jackie O and 'that'. Done
"Others who were also rumoured...", you used the word rumoured before, how about using a different word Done

"14 years-old", years-old does not need to be hyphenated. If it was fourteen-year-old, then yes. Likewise with "16 years old". See here for clarification. Done

"Sebastian and his Under 25 Boys...", Under-25 even?
- Sorry what? I'm confused lol. Oz ^talk 22:25, 22 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  - You forgot to hyphenate between Under and 25! – Lemonade51 (talk) 22:37, 22 February 2012 (UTC) Done[reply]

"All six of the season's audition episodes ranked first on their respective nights and peaked the highest on 30 August", replace '30 August' with the following night. – Lemonade51 (talk) 19:56, 24 February 2012 (UTC) Done[reply]