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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by Cielquiparle (talk16:53, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Created by FuzzyMagma (talk). Self-nominated at 17:22, 9 February 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/The Mafeje Affair; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

  • I'd prefer to give the individual credit by name in the hook. Also, the sources cited spell "outlook" as one word rather than hyphenated; there's an image in the article of a hyphenated "out-look" but that's over a line break. So I would recommend
Agree, but instead of “ to rescind a job offer” use “ to rescind its job offer” FuzzyMagma (talk) 02:32, 12 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Metropolitan90: forgot to ping
  • Claim spot, review to come tonight. @FuzzyMagma: Made copyedits as I read. ALT1 is suitable for the main page (AGF on refs behind paywall). Article is neutral and well cited, QPQ there. However, the article is not technically new enough by DYK criteria - most (I'd guess at least 60%) of the text appears in the first version of Archie Mafeje when it was moved to mainspace on 30 December 2022, and Mafeje affair was split off and nominated on 9 February 2023. It's a shame because this is a very good hook, and the article meets all other criteria. Either or , will leave to others' eyes. @Metropolitan90, BlueMoonset, and Theleekycauldron: could I ping you for your thoughts? Hameltion (talk | contribs) 02:54, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    • Regrettably, although the article seems to be new, the bulk of its text, according to reviewer Hamilton, existed in an article as of the end of December. The article would need to be to expanded to five times the size of that copied text according to WP:DYKSG#A5: If some of the text in a nominated article was copied from another Wikipedia article, and the copied text is more than seven days old, then the copied text must be expanded fivefold as if the copied text had been a separate article. That unfortunately won't be possible. At this point, the article's sole chance for DYK that I can see is to become a Good Article and be nominated again within seven days of that happening. The expansion requirements are irrelevant to GAs. The GA criteria are here; information about the GA nomination process is here. BlueMoonset (talk) 06:02, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
You are correct about the article. Sorry I did not read the rules before putting the article forward. Thanks @BlueMoonset: and @Hameltion: for reviewing the article and especially Hameltion for the extensive copy editing. Regrettably I lost my patience last time when the DYK nomination was turned to a GA review. I should have defended my corner better. Anyway, I will comeback after I bring the article to GA. FuzzyMagma (talk) 06:49, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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GA Review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:Mafeje affair/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Mujinga (talk · contribs) 10:00, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

References

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Spotchecks

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Pix

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  • 1 File:Protests UCT 1968 Jameson hall.jpg - satisfies South African copyright requirements but not I think US copyright per "A South African work that is in the public domain in South Africa according to this rule is in the public domain in the U.S. only if it was in the public domain in South Africa in 1996, e.g. if it was published before 1946 and no copyright was registered in the U.S.". This pic was not in public domain in South Africa in 1996. Not sure what copyright specialcollections.uct.ac.za holds and the given author "The Librarian, Special Collections, University of Cape Town" is unlikely
  • 2 File:Archie Mafeje Tyler Morning Telegraph.webp - nominated for deletion Feb 2023, rationale = "Why should this newspaper-content be PD-South-Afrika? I see none of the mentioned terms met"
  • 3 File:Protests_UCT_1968.jpg - same issue as image1
  • 4 File:Protests UCT 1968 sit in.jpg - same issue as image1, plus www.news.uct.ac.za is copyright of UCT
  • 5 File:Counter-protestors_on_22_August_1968_during_the_Mafeje_affair_02.tif - same issue as image1, also i'm not sure what copyright restrictions the source site https://uct1968sitin.wordpress.com/ is using

Overview

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The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

GA Review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:Mafeje affair/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: FuzzyMagma (talk · contribs) 12:20, 30 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 10:11, 3 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this page, I can see that it's been here for a long while. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 10:11, 3 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

General comments

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The sourcing on this article is inadequate, and I will be quickfailing it.

Prose and contents

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Lede

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  • Move source out of lede per MOS:LEAD

Images

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Your comment about images: Note: images are hidden to avoid quick fail if their copy right is disputed is very concerning. Why haven't you checked if they are disputed? That makes the article more liable for quickfail than if you had just kept them in.

Sources

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  • I'm not really happy at the Medium post being tagged under a different name. That is almost certainly not RS given it appears to be blog written by a grad student.
  • "isreview.org" needs to be changed to International Socialist Review, it's misleading. This is also a non-peer reviewed Marxist journal/magazine: it will need attribution. Same with Rosa-Luxemburg-Stiftung. This is a lobby group.
  • Issues with formatting, i.e. second source classified as "Thesis thesis"
  • There is a huge reliance on primary sources in the article. This is particularly troubling given the political nature of the article, and the era in South Africa it is reporting on. An article of this type needs to rely on secondary sources. Especially given the problem below:
  • I can't evaluate the reliability of some of these newspapers, given they don't have links and are incorrectly written; i.e. "Argus" instead of "Argus Bureau", which could lead to confusion with Cape Argus.
  • Varsity keeps being cited (in about 15 separate references), but nowhere is this explained that it is a student newspaper. It needs to be linked.

Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 10:34, 3 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

I will note as I didn't include it in the review: the thesis used as a source was not approved so really can't be used as a source. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 10:42, 3 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]