Talk:The Divine Comedy (Milla Jovovich album)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Novice7 | Talk 04:43, 14 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead

• The lead should summarize the whole article. The first paragraph is not clear enough and is too short.
• Despite the positive reception, Jovovich has yet to release an official follow-up album – what is its significance here?
• Third paragraph is confusing.
• Similar case in fourth para too. Why do you include details of free downloads etc?

Background and production

• The photo is a copyright violation.
• A comma is needed after SBK Records
• pop star → pop singer. Also, the information about Australian Idol should be removed.
• Many sentences lack sources.
• Why are music videos mentioned here?
• Also, why second album details?

Music and lyrics

• ..."Taken from Milla's site" – poor. Remove that. And what is its signifance? Who said it?
• Her last name is Jovovich. So, use that and not Milla.
• Why a review in this section?
• Also needs sources

Release and promotion

• This section should go below the Album title and artwork section.
• Again, a clear copyright violation.
• Needs copy-editing and also sources.

Album title and artwork

• There are lots of unwanted information. Remove them.
• Source them too.

Reception

• Jovovich had to fight for her rights to have her own music released – source?
• Why some underscores?
• Again, sources needed. Add {{sic}} wherever needed.

Accolades

• Just the addition to Slant Magazine. Can be moved to reception section.
• Needs copy-editing.

Track listing

• Source
• Is the "Unreleased" section necessary?
• Also, formats?
• Credits should be a different section. Its too short. Also, source the credits.

Charts

• In her main page, there is a UK chart? Why is it not included? Also, it is US Heatseekers chart.

Release history

• Source needed

References and media

• Many references need {{cite web}} template.
• Two copyright violations.

• I'm sorry. But, this article is definitely not GA material. I'm failing it for now. Novice7 | Talk 04:11, 27 December 2010 (UTC)