Talk:The Complete Studio Albums (1983–2008)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 05:58, 16 August 2014 (UTC)

Infobox

• After calculating the durations of all albums concluded, I reached a total of 10:10:37. Please fix this accordingly for duration.
• "John 'JellyBean' Benitez" should link to John Benitez
• The "D" should not be capitalized in Marius de Vries
• "Mark 'Spike' Stent" should link to Spike Stent

Lead

• Remove "her former label" from "It was released by her former label Warner Bros. Records on March 26, 2012, to coincide with the release of her twelfth studio album, MDNA"
• "received mixed reception from two reviewers"..... don't need to mention here how many critics reviewed it
• "Hit" in "Madonna's other hit songs" is WP:PEACOCK

Background

• "It was released to coincide and on the same date as the 2012 studio album MDNA"..... MDNA was technically released three days before this box set, so remove the "same day" bit
• "The set includes every studio album Madonna has released"..... had released, and specify that these are previous studio albums
• "for a limited period"..... limited time

Critical reception

• One review is from BBC News, yet the scorebox lists this as "BBC Online". Should read BBC News or simply BBC.
• While Clash doesn't give a very detailed review, I feel more commentary from it could be added.
• The two sentences on Andy Kellman's statement could be merged in first paragraph.

Tracklisting

• It would be helpful to include the total durations of the individual albums as well as combined duration here

References

• See note in "Critical reception" regarding "BBC Online" for ref#2
• ref#3 (Entertainmentwise) is not reliable
• "Dutchcharts.nl" should read MegaCharts in ref#16
• "Lescharts.com" should read Syndicat National de l'Édition Phonographique in ref#18
• "Italiancharts.com" should read Federazione Industria Musicale Italiana in ref#19
• "Spanishcharts.com" should read Productores de Música de España in ref#22
• "Swisscharts.com" should read Swiss Hitparade in ref#23

• I can't rename these last four, the ref are automatically generated by Template:Album chart

• Understood 21:11, 17 August 2014 (UTC)

GA Result

• On hold for seven days

•  Done all. Alex ^{talk page!} 21:02, 17 August 2014 (UTC)

• Passing, nice job :) Snuggums (talk / edits) 21:11, 17 August 2014 (UTC)